The Green Monster’s Visit


I’m super envious,

Of those who’ve been victorious.

In the challenge of limericks,

That gave every poet inspirational kicks.

My spot in top 4 hopefully now makes others jealous!

Do you think I am as pathetic at writing poems as I seem to be? What limerick would you write for the prompt  – envy? Do let me know your thoughts via the comment box below.


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  • MindandLifeMatters
    Posted at 11:45h, 25 May Reply

    Psst. ..sometimes I get envious too…of all those amazing limericks these people come up with! 😉

  • fictionalkevin
    Posted at 12:57h, 25 May Reply

    You think your attempt pathetic
    When you try to wax poetic
    You’ve created envy
    In me never ending
    In mastering the phonetic

    • Wandering Soul
      Posted at 13:03h, 25 May Reply

      Awesome, Kevin! You should definitely participate in the challenge too. 🙂

      • fictionalkevin
        Posted at 13:05h, 25 May Reply

        Maybe I will one of these days. We’ll see. I enjoy it more on the spur of the moment in response to what others write.

        I did a whole batch of them to Meg via email one night when she got stuck on one of the A-Zs.

        • Wandering Soul
          Posted at 13:21h, 25 May Reply

          Wow, that’s cool!! But this one is great too! You should definitely put it up on your blog and link it to Rashmi’s latest post. The prompt this week is ‘envy’. This one fits perfectly.

          • fictionalkevin
            Posted at 14:12h, 25 May

            OK, FINE! I did your stupid limerick thing. I hope you’re happy.

          • Wandering Soul
            Posted at 14:27h, 25 May

            YAY!! *Jumps up and down, hits the head on the fan and falls flat to the ground.*

          • fictionalkevin
            Posted at 14:33h, 25 May

            Maybe you need a “real” doctor?

          • Wandering Soul
            Posted at 14:43h, 25 May


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  • Dr Meg Sorick
    Posted at 14:20h, 25 May Reply

    Oh, I’m envious, now! You managed to do what I never have – convince the Fictional one to join the fray! 😀

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