Timeless Love

Feb 19, 2016 | World of Make Belief, Writing Challenges

“Do you remember this?” He asked her while handing her a small piece of broken silver.

She examined it, then looked at him in surprise. “Isn’t this the …”

“Yes,” he grinned.

“You kept it safe all these years.”

It seemed like a lifetime ago. So much had passed since then.

“I’d constantly shine the sunlight on everybody’s faces. Do you know who I irritated the most?” He laughed.

“You were such a pest even then!” She crinkled her nose at him.

“Yeah… Love you too, Wifey!” He turned her around to show the life-size replica of their most treasured moments.

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PHOTO PROMPT – © Sandra Crook

Word Count – 106

Piyusha Vir

Piyusha Vir

Piyusha Vir is a writer, artist, a CELTA-certified English Language trainer, and a Creative Writing Coach. About me

22 Comments

    • Wandering Soul

      Thank you, Mandi. Your kind words are very reassuring 🙂

      Reply
  1. MindandLifeMatters

    Aww, that’s a cute sweet story! Where have such husbands gone….why do they never appear in front of me? 😛

    Reply
  2. ancientlove

    not to worry, I will know when TELEPATHIC are online again !!!!
    good story, I like.

    Reply
    • Wandering Soul

      Thanks 🙂 I am glad you liked it. 🙂

      Reply
  3. Clueless Birdie

    aww :* I Loved it 🙂 <3 where would I find a husband like this? 😛

    Reply
    • Wandering Soul

      Thank you! I am sure he is round the corner somewhere, looking for you. 🙂

      Reply
  4. gahlearner

    Very sweet, lovely story.

    Reply
  5. Ananya

    Loved it!

    Reply
  6. rochellewisoff

    Dear W.S.

    A cute story. Welcome to Friday Fictioneers.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

    Reply

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