15 Jan Magic

Posted at 20:51h in Random Ramblings, Writing Challenges by
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What’s magic… but a wish of the imaginary

The imagination of the weary!

An illusion of eyes and a sleight of the hand

What’s magic but a world of make belief band

A dream come true, a moment lived without theory!

Sincere apologies for the above. I take no responsibility for it. Whatsoever.
I came up with it impromptu during an informal chat with a friend, who turned out to be a terrorist in disguise and now holds a gun to my head, insisting I post it. So, please bear with me as I try to save my life and put yours in jeopardy by posting my very first attempt at poetry.

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  • MindandLifeMatters
    Posted at 20:56h, 15 January Reply

    That is good poetry…..don’t apologize for it, Piyu! 🙂
    I love the magic in your words!

  • Kadi Didn't
    Posted at 23:58h, 15 January Reply

    I hope you write more poetry. That was nice 🙂

    • Wandering Soul
      Posted at 12:46h, 16 January Reply

      I have absolutely no idea how it came about. I am not at all a ‘poetic’ person 😀

  • Hemangini
    Posted at 03:30h, 16 January Reply

    hahha you write very nice poem under pressure it seems! gotta ask your friend to keep the gun handy! :p nice poem dear, you should be proud you tried! keep it up

  • Rhonda Wiley-Jones
    Posted at 00:05h, 17 January Reply

    If poetry erupts, let it spew. I enjoyed the volcanic blow. Poetry can only be appreciated. Keep it flying in the sky and rolling down the mountain.

    • Wandering Soul
      Posted at 04:56h, 17 January Reply

      Thanks so much, Rhonda! Although I do believe it was a one-off thing 😀

  • Kim Richardson
    Posted at 11:23h, 17 January Reply

    I would call it more a success than an attempt 😀 thank you for sharing!

    • Wandering Soul
      Posted at 15:19h, 17 January Reply

      Wow! That’s a big compliment for me, Kim. Thanks so much. Really appreciate the praise. Thanks so much for reading and commenting. 🙂

  • Megha Agrawal
    Posted at 16:49h, 17 January Reply

    Good but keep on sharing

  • writeintent1
    Posted at 14:10h, 18 January Reply

    You have nicely captured the reality in ‘magic’ through this poem…keep coining more like these 🙂

    • Wandering Soul
      Posted at 14:14h, 18 January Reply

      Thank you! Though I doubt my poetic Haley’s Comet shall visit me again. 😀

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  • pranabaxom
    Posted at 16:21h, 22 January Reply

    What a nice terrorist friend you have. More powers to him so that these beautiful poems keep coming.

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