15 Jan Magic
Posted at 20:51h in Random Ramblings, Writing Challenges 0 Comments
What’s magic… but a wish of the imaginary
The imagination of the weary!
An illusion of eyes and a sleight of the hand
What’s magic but a world of make belief band
A dream come true, a moment lived without theory!
Sincere apologies for the above. I take no responsibility for it. Whatsoever.
I came up with it impromptu during an informal chat with a friend, who turned out to be a terrorist in disguise and now holds a gun to my head, insisting I post it. So, please bear with me as I try to save my life and put yours in jeopardy by posting my very first attempt at poetry.
MindandLifeMattersPosted at 20:56h, 15 January
That is good poetry…..don’t apologize for it, Piyu! 🙂
I love the magic in your words!
Wandering SoulPosted at 20:59h, 15 January
You are just too kind! But, thank you 🙂
Kadi Didn'tPosted at 23:58h, 15 January
I hope you write more poetry. That was nice 🙂
Wandering SoulPosted at 12:46h, 16 January
I have absolutely no idea how it came about. I am not at all a ‘poetic’ person 😀
HemanginiPosted at 03:30h, 16 January
hahha you write very nice poem under pressure it seems! gotta ask your friend to keep the gun handy! :p nice poem dear, you should be proud you tried! keep it up
Wandering SoulPosted at 12:42h, 16 January
Thanks, Hemangini! 🙂
Rhonda Wiley-JonesPosted at 00:05h, 17 January
If poetry erupts, let it spew. I enjoyed the volcanic blow. Poetry can only be appreciated. Keep it flying in the sky and rolling down the mountain.
Wandering SoulPosted at 04:56h, 17 January
Thanks so much, Rhonda! Although I do believe it was a one-off thing 😀
Kim RichardsonPosted at 11:23h, 17 January
I would call it more a success than an attempt 😀 thank you for sharing!
Wandering SoulPosted at 15:19h, 17 January
Wow! That’s a big compliment for me, Kim. Thanks so much. Really appreciate the praise. Thanks so much for reading and commenting. 🙂
Megha AgrawalPosted at 16:49h, 17 January
Good but keep on sharing
writeintent1Posted at 14:10h, 18 January
You have nicely captured the reality in ‘magic’ through this poem…keep coining more like these 🙂
Wandering SoulPosted at 14:14h, 18 January
Thank you! Though I doubt my poetic Haley’s Comet shall visit me again. 😀
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pranabaxomPosted at 16:21h, 22 January
What a nice terrorist friend you have. More powers to him so that these beautiful poems keep coming.
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