18 Nov Boiled Over
She had reached the end of her patience.
Irritated. Frustrated. Defeated. That’s what she felt. The future looked bleak. She had given up completely. Obviously, there was no other way to end this. Without looking back, she looked down from where she was and leapt off.
Landing on the ground with a soft thud, Matrix purred, stretched and walked away. She would have to come back again when the milkpan had cooled off.
Kathy
Posted at 19:39h, 18 NovemberNice. When I read “She had reached the end of her patience.
Irritated. Frustrated. Defeated. That’s what she felt. The future looked bleak. She had given up completely” I thought this is the way I feel sometimes at the end of the day after work. 🙂
Wandering Soul
Posted at 04:39h, 19 NovemberOh, it can get a little too much at times, isn’t it! Maybe you could burp, stretch and walk away. 🙂 Come back only when you feel better 🙂
Kathy
Posted at 13:59h, 19 NovemberLOL – if I walk away from my desk I will run and never come back 🙂
V.
Posted at 00:14h, 19 NovemberI was like oh no is she committing suicide? Then I realized it was a lovely cat. 🙂
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Vibrant
Posted at 01:39h, 06 DecemberWow!! It has a great twist. It is really lovely that you invited me over. I had mistaken you for a travel writer. You have more potential as a storyteller. Great writing. Thank you 🙂
Love and light <3
Anand 🙂
Wandering Soul
Posted at 01:48h, 06 December*blushing* 🙂 Thanks so much! Loving the feedback you are leaving 🙂 Thank you for coming over 🙂
Vibrant
Posted at 02:18h, 06 DecemberYes I loved this story. You are most welcome dear 🙂
Visakha
Posted at 10:34h, 27 DecemberHaha! 😀 Meowww! 😀
I did not see this one coming. Especially after all that reading!
So I guess there’s hope for me since I am writing these now! 🙂
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