Boiled Over

Nov 18, 2015 | World of Make Belief

She had reached the end of her patience.
Irritated. Frustrated. Defeated. Thatโ€™s what she felt. The future looked bleak. She had given up completely. Obviously, there was no other way to end this.ย Without looking back, she looked down from where she was and leapt off.

Landing on the ground with a soft thud, Matrix purred, stretched and walked away. She would have to come back again when the milkpan had cooled off.

Piyusha Vir

Piyusha Vir

Piyusha Vir is a writer, artist, a CELTA-certified English Language trainer, and a Creative Writing Coach. About me

8 Comments

  1. Kathy

    Nice. When I read “She had reached the end of her patience.
    Irritated. Frustrated. Defeated. Thatโ€™s what she felt. The future looked bleak. She had given up completely” I thought this is the way I feel sometimes at the end of the day after work. ๐Ÿ™‚

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    • Wandering Soul

      Oh, it can get a little too much at times, isn’t it! Maybe you could burp, stretch and walk away. ๐Ÿ™‚ Come back only when you feel better ๐Ÿ™‚

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      • Kathy

        LOL – if I walk away from my desk I will run and never come back ๐Ÿ™‚

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  2. V.

    I was like oh no is she committing suicide? Then I realized it was a lovely cat. ๐Ÿ™‚

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  3. Vibrant

    Wow!! It has a great twist. It is really lovely that you invited me over. I had mistaken you for a travel writer. You have more potential as a storyteller. Great writing. Thank you ๐Ÿ™‚

    Love and light <3

    Anand ๐Ÿ™‚

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    • Wandering Soul

      *blushing* ๐Ÿ™‚ Thanks so much! Loving the feedback you are leaving ๐Ÿ™‚ Thank you for coming over ๐Ÿ™‚

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      • Vibrant

        Yes I loved this story. You are most welcome dear ๐Ÿ™‚

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  4. Visakha

    Haha! ๐Ÿ˜€ Meowww! ๐Ÿ˜€
    I did not see this one coming. Especially after all that reading!
    So I guess there’s hope for me since I am writing these now! ๐Ÿ™‚

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